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Runoilija Thomas

Käyttäjän <span class="sydan sydan-punainen sydan-raamit"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M998,312C984,152,870,35,728,35C633,35,546,86,497,168C449,85,366,35,272,35C130,35,16,152,2,312C1,319-4,357,10,418C31,506,79,585,149,649L497,965L851,649C921,585,969,506,990,418C1004,357,999,319,998,312zM952,409C933,489,890,562,826,620L497,913L174,620C110,562,67,489,48,409C34,351,40,319,40,318V317C52,176,150,74,272,74C362,74,442,129,479,218L497,260L515,218C552,130,635,74,728,74C850,74,948,176,960,318C960,319,966,351,952,409z"/></svg></span> Thomas kuva
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Liittynyt: 6.4.2026
Viimeksi paikalla: 21.6.2026 23:23

Asuinpaikka: Netherlands
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Syntymäpäivä:
23.1.1982
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I don't speak Finnish, but thank you for reading my fragmented imagery.

There should be a story between the lines,
but I don't know if it makes sense :)

Olen pahoillani, jos kuulostan töykeältä... se ei ole tarkoitukseni.






 
Suosittelen:
<span class="sydan sydan-punainen"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M497,203C537,107,630,40,737,40C881,40,985,164,998,311C998,311,1005,347,990,413C969,503,919,583,852,643L497,960L148,643C81,583,31,503,10,413C-5,347,2,311,2,311C15,164,119,40,263,40C370,40,457,107,497,203z"/></svg></span> IsoLate <span class="sydan sydan-punainen sydan-raamit"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M998,312C984,152,870,35,728,35C633,35,546,86,497,168C449,85,366,35,272,35C130,35,16,152,2,312C1,319-4,357,10,418C31,506,79,585,149,649L497,965L851,649C921,585,969,506,990,418C1004,357,999,319,998,312zM952,409C933,489,890,562,826,620L497,913L174,620C110,562,67,489,48,409C34,351,40,319,40,318V317C52,176,150,74,272,74C362,74,442,129,479,218L497,260L515,218C552,130,635,74,728,74C850,74,948,176,960,318C960,319,966,351,952,409z"/></svg></span> Tilli <span class="sydan sydan-punainen sydan-raamit"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M998,312C984,152,870,35,728,35C633,35,546,86,497,168C449,85,366,35,272,35C130,35,16,152,2,312C1,319-4,357,10,418C31,506,79,585,149,649L497,965L851,649C921,585,969,506,990,418C1004,357,999,319,998,312zM952,409C933,489,890,562,826,620L497,913L174,620C110,562,67,489,48,409C34,351,40,319,40,318V317C52,176,150,74,272,74C362,74,442,129,479,218L497,260L515,218C552,130,635,74,728,74C850,74,948,176,960,318C960,319,966,351,952,409z"/></svg></span> Nimessun Laura <span class="sydan sydan-punainen sydan-raamit"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M998,312C984,152,870,35,728,35C633,35,546,86,497,168C449,85,366,35,272,35C130,35,16,152,2,312C1,319-4,357,10,418C31,506,79,585,149,649L497,965L851,649C921,585,969,506,990,418C1004,357,999,319,998,312zM952,409C933,489,890,562,826,620L497,913L174,620C110,562,67,489,48,409C34,351,40,319,40,318V317C52,176,150,74,272,74C362,74,442,129,479,218L497,260L515,218C552,130,635,74,728,74C850,74,948,176,960,318C960,319,966,351,952,409z"/></svg></span> Star <span class="sydan sydan-punainen sydan-raamit"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M998,312C984,152,870,35,728,35C633,35,546,86,497,168C449,85,366,35,272,35C130,35,16,152,2,312C1,319-4,357,10,418C31,506,79,585,149,649L497,965L851,649C921,585,969,506,990,418C1004,357,999,319,998,312zM952,409C933,489,890,562,826,620L497,913L174,620C110,562,67,489,48,409C34,351,40,319,40,318V317C52,176,150,74,272,74C362,74,442,129,479,218L497,260L515,218C552,130,635,74,728,74C850,74,948,176,960,318C960,319,966,351,952,409z"/></svg></span> hourekuljetin <span class="sydan sydan-punainen"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M497,203C537,107,630,40,737,40C881,40,985,164,998,311C998,311,1005,347,990,413C969,503,919,583,852,643L497,960L148,643C81,583,31,503,10,413C-5,347,2,311,2,311C15,164,119,40,263,40C370,40,457,107,497,203z"/></svg></span> aquarius
 
pohjavirta vetää
sumutorvi korvassa
 
hylkypuuta, kaihoa
suolaa silmissä
 
ajautuen merelle
lokkien kirskunta vaimenee
 
ehkä vuorovesi kääntyy
Selite: 
Fill in the whitespace. suomi on vaikeaa
oletus

Luotu 30.4.2026

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Kommentit

1.5.2026 12:48 Star
Hyvältä näyttää, osaat mainiosti kirjoittaa.
6.5.2026 17:53 Punainen Joutsen
Tunteikasta
6.5.2026 20:45 Thomas
I hope it translates. I need the whitespace because my suomi is practically non-existent :)
6.5.2026 21:09 Punainen Joutsen
If I didn't know, I couldn' tell that you don't speak finnish. They translate very well, but also bring something fresh, like fresh approach to linguistic images, and in this particular poem It seems to be emotional journey that sinks in the body itself, like if bodily feelings would be the sea that one is sinkin in and the ship would be the witness, the ego. 
19.5.2026 22:46 arlette
Reipasta merihenkistä runoutta...
onhan tapasi tehdä tätä suomeksi mielenkiintoista ja rohkeaa.
Ja kielemme on maailman kauneinta!
Tai lähes kauneinta?
esim./löyly, mölkky, höperö, rälläkkä, jne./
20.5.2026 0:48 Thomas
The language is really beautiful. The minimalism is fantastic :)

But the time it takes to find 1 word... and then check if it doesn't have 4 meanings... it's a nice puzzle
23.5.2026 13:13 miesvaalea
You can't see the bottom, you can feel it.
26.5.2026 18:01 dayfly
Mielenkiintoinen hyvä runo. 
26.5.2026 21:33 Thomas
Kiitos. I'm glad it makes sense :)
 

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