Turning time

Runoilija Heartless Vagabond

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Julkaistu:
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Liittynyt: 17.12.2003

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I have enough friends.
 

Cast away thy weapons,
keepeth thou vigil no more.
Donneth not thy armor,
but let thy duty pass unto generations untold,
yet to taste the glory of strife.

Let rain wash away thy warpaint,
let wind dry the blood of thine enemies,
be warrior no more.

Breaketh thou thine bloodvows,
brothers-in-arms mayeth thou be no more.
Let free wind touch thine darkened hair,
donneth not thine helm again,
thine heart carriest more strength than any shieldings mayest.

Worketh thou with uncovered hands,
worketh thou in peace and not in war,
becometh the poet once more.

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Kommentit

I think you got at least the rhythm of a High Speak quite nicely and the idea can be heard loud and clear.
The finish is the best part of this poem. It whispers softly but powerfully.

Tyylikäs. Vaikuttava.

 

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