![Käyttäjän <span class="sydan sydan-punainen sydan-raamit"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M998,312C984,152,870,35,728,35C633,35,546,86,497,168C449,85,366,35,272,35C130,35,16,152,2,312C1,319-4,357,10,418C31,506,79,585,149,649L497,965L851,649C921,585,969,506,990,418C1004,357,999,319,998,312zM952,409C933,489,890,562,826,620L497,913L174,620C110,562,67,489,48,409C34,351,40,319,40,318V317C52,176,150,74,272,74C362,74,442,129,479,218L497,260L515,218C552,130,635,74,728,74C850,74,948,176,960,318C960,319,966,351,952,409z"/></svg></span> Nimessun kuva](https://cdn.vaiste.com/sites/rakkausrunot.fi/files/styles/medium/public/profiilikuvat/picture-4506-1640469861.jpg?itok=x-ZHts3z "Käyttäjän <span class="sydan sydan-punainen sydan-raamit"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M998,312C984,152,870,35,728,35C633,35,546,86,497,168C449,85,366,35,272,35C130,35,16,152,2,312C1,319-4,357,10,418C31,506,79,585,149,649L497,965L851,649C921,585,969,506,990,418C1004,357,999,319,998,312zM952,409C933,489,890,562,826,620L497,913L174,620C110,562,67,489,48,409C34,351,40,319,40,318V317C52,176,150,74,272,74C362,74,442,129,479,218L497,260L515,218C552,130,635,74,728,74C850,74,948,176,960,318C960,319,966,351,952,409z"/></svg></span> Nimessun kuva")
1.
Sitting on the balcony.
Goblets & wine
and my slender hand
in yours
2.
On this starlit night
I would mesmerize, seduce you.
If you could only see
that I am dancing
3.
Shooting
stars!
Thousands
of heavenly bodies
one after
another
4.
I would hope
you...
I would promise
to seek in you...
You, a human being,
a medulla of a star
singed by the flames
5.
But you are only looking
without seeing
You smile,
and you concur
that the Russians designed
their spying satellites
pretty badly.
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Hienoa eri kielellä taiteilua, tästä ei voi muuta kuin pitää.
hienoja kieli- ja mielikuvia runossasi, pidin!
Very interesting poem structure.
Begins as a small, thin chip, sly,
eventually grow big event.
Reader in an enjoyable, mysterious, exciting read,
experienced, challenging text.
The personal, creative, thoughtful poem,
many layers of experience.
Good, ready, rich in poetry.